here it is! . the voice is CRAP! :O i dont mean YOUR voice is crap. well... iv nevere talked to you verbaly but any way... i can tell you sat in your room and read a script. boooorriiiinnnggg.. thats what all the other TAFE tought students do. its realy GAY.
Heres what you need to do. go to a quiet place. (i could hear your computer humming) and with someone els that can voice act. and TALK the script. dont read it. memorize a small part and experiment with it. have more exitment. if you cant do that. ad some green day type punk rock in the background. just faintly. and more movie scene ambiences. like a fan. the part were they are watching tv was great. but they were still talking boring.
if all goes well, paired with your awsome drawing skillz, you should have a instaint front page flash.
its so anoying listning to the the script
Hamelin
I was laughing the whole time, and absolutely lost it at the crotchless chaps part. Great work!
BiffTheTimid
Thanks dude