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[Hunter/ Deacon: part 3]

Very interesting

I wouldn't worry about messing around with scripture too much. Many movie's based off of scripture alter certain things to add plot elements. I wouldn't call it sacreligious in the least. As for the movie itself, it was very stylistic and intreguing. I can't say I'm a big fan of the music used, but to each his own. The one thing I didn't like was how it was pesented in clip-show format, with no sound effects or voice acting. I know it's hard to find good voice actors, but it would have definitely made it more exciting had there been voice. Also, I know the clip-show format was used to explain Cain's past, but perhaps you could have used a more cinematic style. Oh well, too late now I guess. I'll be looking forward to the next movie. Keep up the good work.

Imp-beast responds:

You are so right.
I tried a crack at it but it never goes the way I need it to.
My voice isn't deep enoough and I sound like an english kid But glad you like
=0)

[karl]

Sorry, but no

Short, boring, not very creative, no backround, low and indiscernable audio, ugly guy as main character, stupid ending, stupid beggining, stupid middle. Just because a movie is better than stick fighters and DBZ does not mean that it itself is good. Remember this and you shall go far.

FireHound responds:

Hehe... everything sucked? yup... happens, gonna adjust the description right away...

[Jackass eXtreme]

ummm.....

well i guess the cars animation are allright... but the rest of this movie sucks.... mostly because its not funny at all and it has the name jackass EXTREME!!

i give you an E for effort (4)

deepdoom responds:

don't worry, i edited that problem :)

[Lonesoul - Episode 2]

Great effort

I can see you put a lot of time into not only the movie, but the special features as well. The flash had a very cinematic feeling to it, and I liked the story. I haven't seen the first, so I don't know how much improvement you've made, but judging by the behind the scenes, you've improved a great deal. I have a few things I'd like to say though, otherwise you wouldn't get much out of my review. I liked some of the effects you used, but others were a bit below par. For example, the eye energy attack thing looked alright some times, and sometimes it looked sort of bad. Also, I know you've been told this before, and others will tell you again, but you should attempt to draw to proportion even more so than you already are. I dont know how old the main character is, but from the looks of it at some points, he's a dwarf, with an oversized head and a small body. Also, you should try to do more frame by frame animation. It really does help a movie. Well, keep up the good work, and I'll look forward to the next.

adam-p89 responds:

Thanks, I'll take your suggestions into account, I never had any training in proportionality until now, we are presently learning it in art class, so I will try to incorporate that in episode 3, thanks!

[A Slight Dose of Coma II]

hm...

Well, I reviewed your last band flash, and there's a lot of improvement visually and musically. A problem is that the flash characters do get a bit old, really fast. Also, so does the music, because you can only do so much with guitar and drums. I suggest expanding the band through any means necessary, or at least start singing. Interesting promotion of the band, and decent music, but keep trying to improve.

Rob-Moseley responds:

As the Dalilama would say...
"A Rose only gets more beutiful as it buds"

[A Slight Dose of Coma]

Mneh....

I didn't hate it, and I actually liked some of the music, but most of it was pretty uninspired. That drum solo made me laugh, but I don't really feel like changing the humor score to 10. As for the flash.... it was pretty bad, regardless of the musical emphasis. As for the name of the band .... mneh.... as for my outlook of your band.... mneh... if you got a good singer and some decent back up vocals I would be a pit more optomistic, but until then... mneh... oh and just to make it clear, I wasn't laughing at the solo because it was so amazingly good. How long has your drummer been playing? If it's been like a year then I suppose I could cut him some slack. All in all, decent yet uninspired music with a rather boring and ugly flash. Cool logo though at least.

Rob-Moseley responds:

I agree with most of what you said. The flash is ugly, yes. The music is uninspired, but I don't see that as a bad thing.